Literature; Love
Thursday, March 6, 2014
Introduction
So there are many types of love. Pure and innocent, and it can also be twisted and dark. Poems on love show the many sides of it and how the poet loves another. Love is versatile and mirrors the structure of some of the "sonnets". Love has no limits, boundaries or capacity because of how different the poems are in showing the levels and intensity of love. Love is a two-way street, where it always includes a second party, the one whom you love be it real or imaginary. And we, yes we, are going to take you down that street.
Delight in Disorder - Robert Herrick
Robert Herrick's book of Poems |
Kindles in clothes a wantonness:
A lawn about the shoulders thrown
Into a fine distraction:
An erring lace which here and there
Enthrals the crimson stomacher:
A cuff neglectful, and thereby
Ribbons flow confusedly:
A winning wave (deserving note)
In tje tempestuous petticoat:
A careless shoes-string, in whose tie
I see a wild civility:
Do more bewitch me than when art
Is too precise in every part.
"Un-confuse" it:
This poem is talking about the perfection of imperfection. From
previous generations, humans have always had the need to strive for perfection.
However, the poet uses the diction, structure and imagery to convey his own perspective
of true perfection.
The poet depends on the visual imagery of woman’s clothing
for the reader to relate to the poet. For example, “Kindles in clothes a
wantonness” gives an image of a woman wearing untidy clothing that attracts the
attention of the poet. The poet is describing the association between a woman’s
choice of clothing and how it causes his attraction to her. The poet also
focuses on specific features such as “lace”, “cuff” and “ribbons” instead of
the whole outfit of the women which actually creates a sense of admiration,
despite the imperfections. The poet also states that he prefers these
imperfections over precise art
The poet uses diction that depicts a sense of disorder. For
example, words like “wantonness”, ”erring”, ”neglected” ,”confusedly”,
”tempestuous”, ”careless” are being used to create a similar visual arrangement
of a jumbled mess, which creates a sense of confusion. This further emphasises
and enhances the feeling of disorder.
Disorder can be easily seen upon the first sight of the
poem. The poem has an irregular rhyme scheme. From the total of fourteen lines,
seven couplets can be found in the poem. For example, the first two lines of
the poem ends with corresponding sounds which are “dress “from line 1 and
“wantonness” from line 2. Lines 9 and 10, and lines 13 and 14 also ends with
corresponding sounds. By creating an irregular rhyme scheme, the poet
highlights the disorder and suggests that even the poem itself have
imperfections. Hence, it conveys a sense of appeal in the imperfect structure
of the poem, and possibly a hint of charm in the woman is included.
The poet’s message of the poem is that with flaws,
the woman is more perfect.
Bright Star - John Keats
Bright star, would I were steadfast as thou art --
Not in lone splendour hung aloft the night
And watching, with eternal lids apart,
Like nature's patient, sleepless Eremite,
The moving waters at their priestlike talk,
of pure ablution round earth's human shores,
or gazing on the new soft-fallen mask
Of snow upon the mountains and the moors --
No -- yet still steadfast still unchangeable,
Pillow'd upon my fair love's ripening breast,
To feel for ever its soft fall and swell,
Awake for ever in a swift unrest,
Still, still to hear her tender-taken breath,
And so live-ever -- or else swoon to death.
John
Keats writes his poem about a star. A star, which will never move for eternity
and never change. This reflects what he wants from love. He wants his love to
be unchanging and it has to suit him. The rhyming scheme is of a Shakespearean
sonnet on love. However, he has a completely different view on love as compared
to the other poems. He compares love to a painting in “thou art” where love
should be perfect and unmoving. He wants to always appreciate it and the lady
of his adoration. The words “soft-fallen” show how he uncovers things about the
lady, he is stripping her bare. Then as the poem goes, the imageries are with
sexual intention. He wants to be “pillow’d upon my fair love’s ripening
breast”, “feel for ever its soft fall and swell” and “her tender-taken breath”.
He wants that of his lover. Thus all this adds up to what type of love he
wants, a dominating type of love. Moreover, the words “priestlike tasks”,
“pure” and “snow” can be found in the poem, which means holy or innocent. This
contrasts to the type of love he desires from his lover. Juxtaposition is used
to highlight the sexual intentions used in the poem. At the last line, John
Keats also reinforces that if he does not get to love the life that he so as to
mention just now, he would really rather not live at all to be honest. However
to be frankly speaking, nowadays nobody would seriously “die” for love and that
show how maybe John Keats was not seriously when he wrote the last line in the
poem. This also reflects the type of love society has created, not everything
is pure and there are many sexual meanings to what lovers do nowadays.
Not in lone splendour hung aloft the night
And watching, with eternal lids apart,
Like nature's patient, sleepless Eremite,
The moving waters at their priestlike talk,
of pure ablution round earth's human shores,
or gazing on the new soft-fallen mask
Of snow upon the mountains and the moors --
No -- yet still steadfast still unchangeable,
Pillow'd upon my fair love's ripening breast,
To feel for ever its soft fall and swell,
Awake for ever in a swift unrest,
Still, still to hear her tender-taken breath,
And so live-ever -- or else swoon to death.
"Un-confuse" it:
John Keat's real "Bright Star" |
Longing - Matthew Arnold
Come to me in my dreams, and then
By day I shall be well again!
for so the night will more than pay
The hopeless longing of the day.
Come, as thou cam'st thousand times,
A messenger from radiant climes,
As kind to other as to me!
Or, as though never cam'st in sooth,
Come now, and let me dream it truth,
And part my hair, and kiss my brow,
And say, my love why sufferest thou?
Come to me in my dreams, and then
By day I shall be well again!
for so the night will more than pay
The hopeless longing of the day.
"Un-confuse" it:
“Longing” is one of Matthew Arnold’s most
popular works. The poem itself is written in the perspective of a man. The name
of the poem is “Longing”. Longing refers to that of a yearning desire for
something that is generally distant from it. This man constantly wishes to see
a particular woman in his dreams. He dreams of her at night, such that he could
be together with her till the next morning. Possibly, he dreams of her at night
to make the wait to see her again the next day, less painful. She could be very
far away from him, and he really is longing to see her. Thus, the name of the
poem. This woman has appeared in the man’s
dreams a thousand times before. In fact, she is very kind to him. The man wants
the lady to be as kind as she is to him, to others. This woman is not real, as
the man can only see her in his dreams. This is evident as the man states in
the third stanza that he wants the lady to “Part his hair, and kiss his brow”
and he says that he wants her to “Come and let me dream it truth”. This
suggests that he wants a physical relationship as such, with this lady, to come
true. It shows that he has only been dreaming about it. The last stanza is actually a repeat of
the first stanza. This could represent a vicious cycle that symbolizes the man
dreaming of the lady: It happens every night. It is very repetitive. The stanza begins with: “Come to me in my dreams, and then By day I shall be well again!” This shows that the man is sick and the
lady’s presence, even in that of his dreams, is the only cure. Perhaps, he is
lovesick. Aside from that of his dreams, the man is unable to see the Lady very
often. Thus, he could be lovesick and longs to see the Lady more. Lastly, the structure of the poem. The poem
uses a very distinct Iambic Pentameter. Each sentence contains exactly eight
syllables. There is also a very prominent rhyme scheme of “aabb”. I believe
this poem applies to anybody, in love. They can also relate to dreaming of
their lover, and longing to see them, the very next day.
Sonnet 43 How Do I Love Thee? Let me Count the Ways - Elizabeth Barrett Browning
How do I love thee? Let me count the ways.
I love thee to the depth and the breadth and the height
My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight
For the ends of being and ideal grace.
I love thee to the level of every day's
Most quiet need, by sun and candle-light.
I love thee freely, as men strive for right.
I love thee purely, as they turn from praise.
I love thee with the passion put to use
In my lost saints. I love thee with the breath,
Smiles, tears, of all my life; and, if God choose,
I shall but love thee better after death
The sonnet is written by an English poet, Elizabeth Browning to her husband Robert Browning and is only one of the 44 she has written for him. She uses many literary techniques to get her idea across. The poem has an obvious rhyming scheme of an Italian sonnet with 12 lines. This is significant because at that time, English poets tend to write in Shakespearean sonnets but Elizabeth Browning had chosen to use the Italian sonnet instead. This then reflects to how love has no boundaries. This can also be seen through how she uses the word “thee” instead or he as “thee” has no gender linked to it and it shows how love has no limits as well. Moreover, she uses the words “sun’ and “candle-light” in line 6 to show how love is something that we might not always know that it is there but it always is. The poem also uses an excessive amount of “th”. “th” is a soft sound, it is there but rarely heard which parallels to how love may sometimes be strong but it is still present now matter how much we do not see it. This is true on many levels to how our parents love each other, the children may not see it but the parents do love each other so very much. The iambic pentameter is broken in lines 2 and 5 thus adding more emphasis on them. These two lines are the “measurements” of love to, “depth and the breadth and height” and “level of every day’s”. This shows the volume of her love and that it has no capacity and that is how we should show our love. Moreover in society, there is an increase number of mixed race marriages. This also showing how Elizabeth Browning is trying to portray how love has absolutely no boundaries that we have to follow. This makes us think again to how love is treated.
I love thee to the depth and the breadth and the height
My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight
For the ends of being and ideal grace.
I love thee to the level of every day's
Most quiet need, by sun and candle-light.
I love thee freely, as men strive for right.
I love thee purely, as they turn from praise.
I love thee with the passion put to use
In my lost saints. I love thee with the breath,
Smiles, tears, of all my life; and, if God choose,
I shall but love thee better after death
"Un-confuse" it:
The sonnet is written by an English poet, Elizabeth Browning to her husband Robert Browning and is only one of the 44 she has written for him. She uses many literary techniques to get her idea across. The poem has an obvious rhyming scheme of an Italian sonnet with 12 lines. This is significant because at that time, English poets tend to write in Shakespearean sonnets but Elizabeth Browning had chosen to use the Italian sonnet instead. This then reflects to how love has no boundaries. This can also be seen through how she uses the word “thee” instead or he as “thee” has no gender linked to it and it shows how love has no limits as well. Moreover, she uses the words “sun’ and “candle-light” in line 6 to show how love is something that we might not always know that it is there but it always is. The poem also uses an excessive amount of “th”. “th” is a soft sound, it is there but rarely heard which parallels to how love may sometimes be strong but it is still present now matter how much we do not see it. This is true on many levels to how our parents love each other, the children may not see it but the parents do love each other so very much. The iambic pentameter is broken in lines 2 and 5 thus adding more emphasis on them. These two lines are the “measurements” of love to, “depth and the breadth and height” and “level of every day’s”. This shows the volume of her love and that it has no capacity and that is how we should show our love. Moreover in society, there is an increase number of mixed race marriages. This also showing how Elizabeth Browning is trying to portray how love has absolutely no boundaries that we have to follow. This makes us think again to how love is treated.
To My Dear and Loving Husband - Anne Bradstreet
If ever two were one, then surely we.
If ever man were loved by wife, then thee.
If ever wife was happy in a man,
Compare with me, ye women, if you can.
I prize thy love more than whole mines gold,
Or all the riches that the East doth hold.
My love is such that river cannot quench,
Nor ought but love from thee give recompense.
Thy love is such I can no way repay;
The heavens reward thee manifold, I pray.
Then while we live in love let's so persever,
that when we live no more, we may live ever.
If ever man were loved by wife, then thee.
If ever wife was happy in a man,
Compare with me, ye women, if you can.
I prize thy love more than whole mines gold,
Or all the riches that the East doth hold.
My love is such that river cannot quench,
Nor ought but love from thee give recompense.
Thy love is such I can no way repay;
The heavens reward thee manifold, I pray.
Then while we live in love let's so persever,
that when we live no more, we may live ever.
"Un-confuse" it:
This
poem is talking about a woman's love to her husband. The poet uses the
structure of the poem to convey her intentions of the poem across. The poem has
an obvious rhyming pattern of 6 couplets, thus this signifying how strong her
love is for her husband through the use of couplets. Moreover, the language
used in the first live "two were one", the second line
"man" then "wife" and the third line "wife" then
"man" show how deep a bond there is between the couple reinforcing
the idea behind the rhyming couplets. The poet also compares her husband’s
love in lines 6 – 8. In both lines 6 and 7, she compares her husband’s love to
“riches” and “whole mines of gold”, and that she prizes her husband’s love to
all those precious things. In lines 8 and 9, she compares her own love for him
with nature where it is like “rivers that cannot quench” thus then showing how
her love for her husband will just keep flowing and that her love for him is
endless. Moreover, the only thing she wants back from her unfailing love for
him is for him to love her back the same way through “nor ought but love from
thee give recompense”. Back the
structure, the last three lines are the only lines that do not follow the
iambic pentameter like the rest of the poem. This creates emphasis on the last
three lines. These three lines, show both her love for her husband through life
and death. “the heavens reward thee manifold, I pray” is the present along with
“while we live, in love” show that she wants them to love now. And the
last line indicates death in “when we live no more”, she wants them to continue
loving till death in “may live ever” which is forever. This shows and
reinforces the point to how she wants their love to be endless through both
structure and language used and all she wants her husband to do is to love her
back endlessly like she will to him. An endless love.
Leveling Confusion - Kugan, Jiayi, Syarifah & Cheryl
I hate you
can't you tell from how I look at you?
I dislike you
is it not evident from my writing to you?
I am fine with you
is our daily pleasantry not enough for you?
l ke you
do you feel our chemistry during Chemistry?
(i)Phone, (i)Pad, used w thout ma nta ning eye-contact.
How my words do not suff ce from that beh nd a screen,
your presence g ves me conf dence to present what s w th n.
As I walk to your s de, my fears beg n to subs de,
my worr es res de, I say with conf dence and pr de,
love you.
can't you tell from how I look at you?
I dislike you
is it not evident from my writing to you?
l ke you
do you feel our chemistry during Chemistry?
(i)Phone, (i)Pad, used w thout ma nta ning eye-contact.
How my words do not suff ce from that beh nd a screen,
your presence g ves me conf dence to present what s w th n.
As I walk to your s de, my fears beg n to subs de,
my worr es res de, I say with conf dence and pr de,
love you.
"Un-confuse" it:
This poem has a very strong and a very interesting structure
to it. The theme it is under is love. However, the poem begins with “I hate
you”. This is certainly used to confuse the reader. However, that is what we
have chosen to do. Our group has used the idea of starting off with a negative
emotion to begin the poem. This is used in juxtaposition of a sweet love. It
begins off with the writer hating a certain person. However, the writer slowly
realizes that he/she likes that person and later on, finds out that it is love.
However, at the beginning, the
writer is unsure of his feelings towards this girl. This is why he asks so many
rhetorical questions in the structure. However, his feelings slowly progress in
a positive and gentle mood. From hating the girl, to disliking her, to being
fine with her, to liking her, and soon Love. The fast changes also reflect to
how the audience is meant to be for teenagers, where youths nowadays be it boys
or girls have violent and changing moods which cannot be comprehended. In each
line before love (eg; I hate you) there is no punctuation, or a full stop to
signify that a point has been brought up. This also contributes to the fact
that the writer is unsure of his feelings towards the girl, using enjambment. However,
in the end when the writer finally says “I love you” there is a full stop, to
signify that he is confident and absolutely sure of his feelings towards this
girl. The poem also has a distinctive 14 line flow, much like in a sonnet (a
poem of love). This fitting as our poem is one of love, but even though it is,
it doesn’t follow the elaborate rhyme scheme. This shows how love can also be
free without restrain. One of the important points that we have brought up in
our poem, is the fact that towards the end of the poem, the letter “I” begins
to disappear. In the beginning, the letter “I” remains in the lines as they are
used to signify that the writer does not have a certain liking for the girl,
yet. However, as the poem
progresses, the writer finds out that he indeed loves her. As such, they are
meant to be in a relationship. “I” or “She” is now “Us” and there is no “I” in
“Us”. Thus, to symbolize that the writer isn’t just an “I”, but rather “We”, we
have taken out all the “I”’s towards the end of the poem. Love isn’t about “I”,
it’s about “Us”. The cancellation of the “I” also signifies how in love, our
thinking is no longer centered around ourselves but around the one we love,
which is also why the word “you” is repeated more times than the letter “I” due
to the cancellation.
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